Page 1 of What do you think of my Dogma review?

Hey everybody, i just wrote my first review on this site on Kevin Smith`s Dogma. Please leave any positive or negative feedback on thoughts about my review. I would like to know what i am doing right or wrong and how i can improve. Thanks.

Welcome to the world of DVD reviewing mate! :)

As for your debut, good write-up, although I think that whilst you introduced the story and characters well, more time spent on the film itself would have been good, as for example I myself want to know more about why the film is supposed to be so good.

Also, when you give full marks in certain categories, perhaps a bit more justification as to why you think that category is perfect would be needed.

Another Welcome Aaron.

I won`t get technical as Richard made all the salient points
I also won`t nitpick over little things like spelling.

The best advice I can give is to keep at it.
The more films you write about, the better your writing will get.
You`ll learn by doing.

If you don`t do this already, write your review first then cut and paste.
It`ll give you time to sort your thoughts out before you commit them to the net. Most important of all, enjoy yourself.

I`m looking forward to your next review
:-)

Hey thanks a lot. I see your a really good reviewer. Youve reviewed a lot of dvds! I`m gonna keep practicing!

And another thing - the more you review, the more chance of you being asked to become a site reviewer at some stage if more staff are needed, and you are up to the task (with the reward of free DVDs!). :)

Careful Rich,

Professional secrets, nudge nudge, wink wink

Say no more!

;-)

This item was edited on Monday, 3rd February 2003, 19:20

Aaron, good to see you on the forums at last. Welcome!! Good start with the Dogma review and we hope this will be the start of many more reviews to come!

Rich, our friend Aaron here is from the States :-)

Anil

Nice one on the review and welcome to Reviewer. Although I am an opinionated, gobby little git I have yet to muster the bottle to write a review. Maybe one day!!!

Nick

Ah yes - just realised after reading Aaron`s profile. Good to see the folks over the Pond are finding (and using) the site. :)